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SEA
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0 posted 2008-08-10 01:11 AM



Her bones knew nothing
Of history
They do not recall
Things gone by
They are after all
Gone.

….I have no need of this

Her bones knew nothing
Of memories
And how they haunt
Dead is in fact,
Dead.


Ashes to ashes……

Her bones knew nothing
Of regret
Every step is a lesson
Every word, every action
A choice.

.....Life is about living


Her bones knew nothing
Of tomorrow
It would be faced
Like each before
With purpose and direction.


don’t show me the way, I’ll find my own.....

~SEA~

*thank you Bobby for the inspiration in your title
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-08-10 02:28 AM


SEA... I think you are an inspiration!  This is very beautiful... love RDB

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2 posted 2008-08-10 02:30 AM


I love this, Sea.
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3 posted 2008-08-10 02:36 AM


Lovely, SEA
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4 posted 2008-08-10 06:23 AM


SEA~

*soft smiles* here~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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5 posted 2008-08-10 08:56 AM


Yo dear SEA,

This is a good picture and poem combination.  I like it loads.  What a lovely young lady.

Thanks for mentioning my Bones poem.

Love Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (08-10-2008 09:30 AM).]

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6 posted 2008-08-10 09:29 AM


quote:
Her bones knew nothing
Of regret
Every step is a lesson
Every word, every action
A choice.

.....Life is about living



You were beautifully inspired and you are powerfully determined.

Very much enjoyed this insightful write.

Love,
Margherita

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7 posted 2008-08-10 12:06 PM


Susan, you make it so easy....well done.
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8 posted 2008-08-10 02:20 PM


nice description of how this persona has arrived at this particular stage of her life
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9 posted 2008-08-10 04:35 PM


A very good Write SEA!

Wonderful


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10 posted 2008-08-10 06:14 PM


Wow, SEA!!  I so liked this!!! Took over as my favorite of yours...

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11 posted 2008-08-10 07:34 PM


My bones can do tricks!



Really!

I have a double-jointed hip, but I'm afraid to do that trick now, because bones might not remember, but muscles? heh

I don't even wanna think about it...

*touching the screen*

You are sweeter than sugar cane.

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12 posted 2008-08-10 07:38 PM


how awesome, your poem-inspired Poem!

how expressive and full of meaning!

I enjoyed reading it!

   danny cobb

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I just wanted to say thank you to all.
and Karen, you got strong bones woman


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I really need some inspiration like this!

love you

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15 posted 2008-08-12 01:37 AM


*chuckling at Karen*

SEA?...

Everytime I read you, I'm reminded
that I need to read you more...

This is lovely...



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of power the world will know peace."
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16 posted 2008-08-12 10:16 AM


Oooh I like this, very striking indeed
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17 posted 2008-08-12 07:59 PM


susan-

beautiful read! this had a
beautiful sadness to it...
your writing always touches me
deep within.



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18 posted 2008-08-12 11:15 PM


Really enjoyed this SEA, beautiful wording. A very unique style as well. Take care and Have fun. Steve


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to be inspired is the greatest gift!




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20 posted 2008-08-13 06:23 AM


ms suesea, I think about your bone now
something about jumping..no that is a rope huh..oh well, enjoyed the poem

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21 posted 2008-08-13 04:59 PM


Susan, I not only did I enjoy this inspired poem, I appreciated the creative format you did it in, as well!


Linda


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22 posted 2008-08-13 05:15 PM




There are some lovely things here, SEA, and the photo is lovely as well.  Thank you for these.  BobK.

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23 posted 2008-08-13 05:28 PM



bernie


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24 posted 2008-08-14 09:59 AM


Susan...Great write, enjoyed...Paul

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Paul

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