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vandana
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0 posted 2008-08-09 06:06 PM





My Heart

My heart
My love
My soul
You are my heart
My hear and soul
my love
My darling,
Every minute
Every hour
Your true love that counts
Every hours of your love
that brings my heart
Into desires
My heart counts
Every hour of your love
Like shooting stars falls
Whispering calls
Into my beating heart
Like a heaven to me
A dream come true
My heart that desires
My beating heart
My heart....


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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-08-09 06:10 PM


quote:
Every hour of your love
that brings my heart
Into desires
My heart counts
Every hour of your love
Like shooting stars falls
Whispering calls
Into my beating heart



This is very lovely and joyful, dear Vandana.

Congratulations for your 10000 posts!!!

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-08-09 07:21 PM


Yo dear Vandana,

This is very nice.

Love Bobby

LindsayP
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3 posted 2008-08-09 10:00 PM



A very romantic post this one Vandana

written from the heart, enjoyed.

Lindsay

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4 posted 2008-08-09 11:26 PM


Indeed a romantic write Vandana!-- I like how you express that love is a great force,a power beyond explanation.. And that you crave it from  your love!


ARCTIC WIND

Alison
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5 posted 2008-08-10 02:41 AM


Lovely way to show the beauty of your heart, vandana.

Alison

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6 posted 2008-08-10 03:05 AM


Very romantic, Vandana.
                   Ida

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2008-08-10 06:16 AM


VanDana~

'My heart counts
Every hour of your love
Like shooting stars falls
Whispering calls
Into my beating heart'


Your ink is always so tender~

I remember the day you stepped into our poetic circle ... how much you have shared~
Congrats on reaching that 10,000th mile marker~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2008-08-10 06:30 AM


Vandana,
Congratulations on your 10000th post !! wow!!! amazing!!!
Your poem is wonderful.... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Magnus
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9 posted 2008-08-10 02:26 PM


V,  you do write of love so passionately,
enjoyed.

Mark Bohannan
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10 posted 2008-09-05 03:58 PM


Beautiful sentiments of love and passion in this.  Much enjoyed.
TheAnonDavid
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11 posted 2008-09-05 04:29 PM


In the harsh materialistic world we encounter every day, an oasis of romance makes tha blackest heart feel young and carefree again.
This is such an oasis ...

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Dylan Thomas

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12 posted 2008-09-07 03:45 PM


Lovely writing, Vandana
                     Ida

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