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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
movement light dark spaces holes in places did it make you uncomfortable do you have to keep reading do you have to know what is to come perhaps i will show you maybe it will follow from my words spread out through like a seed through a storm touching all in its path perhaps it will die in its ending make it what you wish a tradgedy or a rose spread what you feel but always hold what you love To take a lot of pain, |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Walter Poe, I'd advise always capitalizing your first person singular pronoun. Bobby |
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