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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2008-08-08 07:23 PM

In Sacred Succession

Past, through the walls of blue waterfalls
By the footbridge in audible moan
Channels sequence; spending mosaic calls
Highs and lows take on colors and tone

Glee faithfully; weather here, whether there
Apart beats two hearts so in tune
Such a soft rippled dance of the wind unaware
Hoping time doubts its watch oh so soon

Then again, to begin on a journey still pink
Each reflection progressive and deep
Walking on water, into bliss shadows sink
As each sacred succession might keep

By my eye, passes by, floats of delicate prayer
With the life force of love powered on
By the banks moist and moss, natures carpet and care
All a part of each fair day to dawn

Copyright Kkh 8/8/08

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2008-08-08 07:28 PM

you take my breath with words
of beautiful mind places
as i enter your pages

Ada'Do'Lis'Do'Ti
Junior Member

since 2006-07-04

Posts 24
germany

2 posted 2008-08-08 08:03 PM

Nice, I enjoyed the rythm

Everyday I see a sunrise is a blessing, Every night I see the moon rise is a miracle.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-08-09 11:52 AM

quote:
Such a soft rippled dance of the wind unaware
Hoping time doubts its watch oh so soon

Beautiful thoughts as always masterfully expressed, dear Kathleen.

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-08-09 02:25 PM

Beautiful thoughts indeed!

ARCTIC WIND

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2008-08-10 01:43 PM

You, my friend...have such a way with words.
Always make me sit in awe, saying IWIHWT..
over and over again...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2008-08-10 02:07 PM

Kathleen~

'Such a soft rippled dance of the wind unaware'

You make the rippled words dance for us~

Lovely, lovely~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2008-08-11 02:26 PM

Feelings tied in with nature and of course water always will find a way of capturing my attention and the fact that you write so well doesn't hurt a bit either. Nicely done Kathleen.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

8 posted 2008-08-11 03:02 PM

Perfect.

Eric

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2008-08-12 12:56 PM

Past, through the walls of blue waterfalls
By the footbridge in audible moan

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To me, those couple lines set the mood perfectly.
You have such a beautiful mind and your poetry is in a class by itself.

It is a wonderful gift you share here, Kathleen~

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