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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2008-08-08 07:20 PM



Days elapse
since interception
when gilded
in our cloak
of dreams

our shadows woke
amid the field
where royal callalillies
bloomed

stalled now
of where we began,
birthed of
its golden cauldron

meditations
on the gifting
of the sun's reflection,
draped for now
in mystic mood
beyond
the cirrus clouds

in wait of
if and when
we may resume

© Copyright 2008 inkedgoddess - All Rights Reserved
MOCindy
Member
since 2008-07-30
Posts 73

1 posted 2008-08-08 07:24 PM


read many times. simply beautiful!!! I'll come back to read more.
C

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2008-08-09 12:28 PM


A golden cauldron...
Astounding metaphor...longing...waiting
yearning.

The mind deceives the heart so often.
Love your works ;0

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2008-08-09 11:39 AM


quote:
draped for now
in mystic mood
beyond
the cirrus clouds



Such captivating imagery. Beautiful inspiration.

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-08-09 02:24 PM


our shadows woke
amid the field
where royal callalillies
bloomed......................................................."

Enjoyed the Write Inked!


ARCTIC WIND

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
5 posted 2008-08-12 12:09 PM


I pass this little tatoo shop on my way to work everyday,
the name of the place is called Bone Deep, it's painted purple,
and I always think of you.  You get down to the nitty gritty
and write with so much attention to detail.  

It's really lovely what you do, good goddess.

Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
6 posted 2008-08-12 08:19 AM


I have found a treasure to take me through my day. Wonderful images.

"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
7 posted 2008-08-12 08:38 AM


thank you kindly for looking in
the bone deep..ouch........
but being an inkedgoddess
i like that too

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2008-08-14 07:39 PM


Wonderful...James
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
9 posted 2008-08-14 09:33 PM


Didn't seem my response on this one...I know I read it at least twice before today....thought I had responded...age does that to one you know....t h o u g h t  i mean...i do a lot of thought was wasn't what I thought I though! thought.

anway...I plum liked every word of it with every read of it!!!

j.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
10 posted 2008-08-14 10:04 PM


glad i stopped back in here again tonight

good to read you!

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