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ChrisTonner
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0 posted 2008-08-08 12:52 PM


The End?

No ending, so abrupt
not even time to interrupt.
No goodbye, no farewell
not even time for me to yell.

Time flies when your having fun
those snatched moments in the sun.
A brief encounter, a heady treat
was I a fool allowing us to meet?

Its over now thats definitely clear
A hole in my heart where I held you dear.
Life and love move on they say,
not for me, please stay!!

Aug '08'


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MOCindy
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since 2008-07-30
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1 posted 2008-08-08 01:29 PM


wow, this is good romance. Love the read. Sigh.
C

ChrisTonner
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2 posted 2008-08-08 01:39 PM


Thanks MOCindy putting it on paper helps with the pain, at least thats what I find.
Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-08-09 11:25 AM


Time flies when your having fun...."

That is so true!


ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-08-10 07:01 AM


Chris.... if it's meant to be, it will be.... lovely gifting here... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Magnus
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5 posted 2008-08-10 02:21 PM


Pain....that is why poets write so much.
MOst all of them have issues at one point
or another....

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