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gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
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0 posted 2008-08-07 11:01 PM



I want to be everything to you
But now you’re gone
And I can’t face the facts
That I should have talked to you
Before I left without saying hello
What was your name I cant remember
I wish I could have asked you of everything you could want
But now I have nothing left to say
Cause your gone and ill just have to remember
Every time I saw you I couldn’t get the words to speak
But when you weren’t listing I could tell you
The only thing I want to do
Is tell you that I want to be the only one with your hand
But that wont make a difference if you didn’t pay attention
It will just be in the air after I said it
Now I have everything said to you
And you didn’t listen to anything I had
To tell you when I did
You shouldn’t have left me like that
With something left to say
Now I want to give you everything I have

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MOCindy
Member
since 2008-07-30
Posts 73

1 posted 2008-08-08 12:03 PM


Sad. But don't give yet.
Very emotional.
C

amusemi
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
2 posted 2008-08-08 07:24 AM


I can tell you've been really aching over this and my heart goes out to you.  I hope for you that you find the answer to your situation and that it brings about the results you desire...hugs.
marcel
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 660
az, usa
3 posted 2008-08-10 09:43 PM


very sad and emotional piece...........
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