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martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2008-08-07 07:52 PM



Holding strips
up to the light
Golden Crimson
images in sight

faces places
good memories and past
can we renew
friendships that last

towers and hours
still
building a space

wanting to place
a smile
on our face

take courage
don't wait
the rumors
are fake

just
open your heart
begin
communicate

what's true
is kind
is forgiven
in time

good intentions
remind
the truth
in our minds

ignite unite
with much fun
to share

we dance
perchance
with savoire faire

you'll find
refine
good days
reveal

the comfort
and ease
are feelings
we feel

© Copyright 2008 Kenneth Bradley Smith - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2008-08-07 08:55 PM


Your poem certainly lives up to it's title, very nice writing, indeed.

Cheers to you and your positive outlook.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (08-07-2008 11:42 PM).]

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2008-08-10 05:59 PM


I like this poem a lot.

Alison

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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3 posted 2008-08-10 09:14 PM


sweet poem
martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
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Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
4 posted 2008-08-12 04:16 AM


Thank you guys. I appreciate your feed back. I hope to post more soon.
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