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Open Poetry #43

A Wicked Game

A Beautiful Disaster
Member

since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2008-08-07 06:03 PM

In crystal drops of my tears
I'm seeking just your reflection,
Deceptive guise of perfection,
Love that's been lasting for years.

You play the game with my fate,
And draw is always the ending.
We sure could keep pretending,
But tell me: is it too late?

I wonder: why should I care?
I'd better live on my own;
But I would never have known
So much without you there.

So, but for you, king of hearts,
No longer I'd meet the dawn,
In game with fate - just a pawn,
And in the world - just a shard.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-08-07 07:44 PM

Yo dear A Beautiful Disaster,

This has good use of end rhymes dear. It's coming right along.

Love Bobby

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