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Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2008-08-07 05:29 PM


Bones was part of our
eastern man-swarm,

part of our nameless
urban horde.  

We didn’t use last names.  

We considered that to be
too dangerous.  

It made you traceable.  

First names and nicknames
were all we needed.  

You only need a last name
if you have a bank account.  

Bones never quite got that far.  

He lived on a cash only basis.  

He was seen, and never heard.  
He never got to tell his story.

Bobby

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Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2008-08-07 10:50 PM


It's nice you can tell it for him, Bobby.
                              Ida

MOCindy
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since 2008-07-30
Posts 73

2 posted 2008-08-08 12:04 PM


As touched as reading  Felix.
C

Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2008-08-08 11:01 AM


Thanks dear Ida,

I'll try my best to do that Hon.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-08-08 11:03 AM


Thanks MOCindy,

Bones is of the next generation after Felix.  Thanks for remembering about Felix.

Bobby

poddarku
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india
5 posted 2008-08-08 11:03 AM


this is clever
Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-08-08 11:12 AM


Thanks Poddarku,

For the kind words on this little poem.

Bobby

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
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Bangalore,India
7 posted 2008-08-15 01:40 PM


Hi Bobby, many of my friends do what Bones does, it reminds me of them. Clever Bones. Prasad
Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
8 posted 2008-08-15 04:39 PM


Thanks Prasad,

You have some very smart friends.  It's a wise way to be.

Bobby

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