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ChrisTonner
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0 posted 2008-08-07 09:07 AM


Rehab

Travelling on a rolercoster of pain,
waist deep in a murky mire.
Trying to claw away my soul stain,
without falling back into the fire.

But its hard dealing with whats done,
a long road to the middle again.
Will there ever again be fun,
or an increasing, spirrailing drain?


October '04'


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MOCindy
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1 posted 2008-08-08 02:00 PM


good. sense the struggle.
C

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2 posted 2008-08-08 03:36 PM


Chris - Perhaps be like me and take it one day at a time.  One can travel a lot of miles that way.  Writing helps too.

Helen

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3 posted 2008-08-10 07:39 PM


Chris,

It looks like you wrote this some time ago - hopefully, that means that you won the battle.  Great poem.

Alison

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