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gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
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0 posted 2008-08-06 11:54 PM



I got the chills today
Your heart keeps me from being lonely
Even though you haven’t noticed that I’m alone
I keep trying to get the hello from you
But you keep turning the other way
Nothing I do keeps you around
Maybe you’re bored of this boring attitude
I passed you by and you said hi
To the person in front of me
Didn’t even notice I’m alive
Nothing I do keeps you from turning the other way
I keep asking Him why before I go away
To the place where I’m not needed
Please let her talk
Please let her speak
Before I have to leave today
I’ve gone down to the place where I was sworn not to
I was searching for your pretty eyes
Nothing I believe is true
I want to find out where you are now
But pretty soon I will find out where your life is now
Now I have to go around and see what you’re doing
Before the sea of red dies
And everything ends up lying about their lives
And I want to figure your pretty name out
Nothing I do will find your pretty face
I want to talk to you but ill find out
That I have nothing to say

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MOCindy
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since 2008-07-30
Posts 73

1 posted 2008-08-08 02:05 PM


sigh! good poem.
C

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