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The Dress
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The Dress |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
The Dress So sweet must be the touch Like rose petals and silk A dream close enough to smell Scents of sunshine and honey Thoughts of forbidden love Clouds look upon loveliness While the wind exhales and tugs Painted flowers drink sweat Opening like an umbrella A rainbow belt adorns Hidden treasure under eve's shadow. Marcel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wow, love the look and how perfectly feminine she is in all her finery. Beautiful shadow play of words, marcel~ |
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MOCindy Member
since 2008-07-30
Posts 73 |
indeed beautiful poem. C |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
One of those off the shoulder, flash the thigh kind of summer days. Very sensual write  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely! Love, Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You, sir..do have a way with words... |
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