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Open Poetry #43
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since 2008-04-14
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Pluto
0 posted 2008-08-06 11:14 PM

Rushing surging

Gushing of

Internal purging

Passion’s blood

Flowing rampant

Circulates

No longer dormant

Now creates

Verse






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since 2005-11-07
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1 posted 2008-08-07 12:26 PM

Wow, Victor!  You certainly did (create verse)!

- Owl
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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2 posted 2008-08-07 03:11 PM

Excellent!

Eric
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