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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-08-06 03:39 PM



Not just near to
You…yet
Fully known against the
Flesh and deeper still
As bones collide –
We remember…heaven in the
Oneness that we offer.



© Copyright 2008 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2008-08-06 07:44 PM


You write in sweet, sweet whispers.

Sexy and enticing, without a hint of lurid.

Lovely!

Artic Wind
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2 posted 2008-08-06 10:31 PM



        Lovely!

ARCTIC WIND

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2008-08-09 07:24 AM


Deeper still.

Margherita
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4 posted 2008-08-09 12:23 PM


You do know of the depth that makes separation impossible.

Wonderful!


Margherita

jwesley
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5 posted 2008-08-09 12:27 PM


so much seen in so few words....wonderful.

j.

Honeybunch
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6 posted 2008-08-10 04:13 AM


Beautiful as always, Eric.  Sometimes the remembering takes the edge off of life but sometimes it shines it up and the trick is to keep it shining no matter what comes our way.  Sometimes that's hard to do but try, try again, right?

Love
Helen

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