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ChrisTonner
Junior Member

since 2008-08-06

Posts 24

0 posted 2008-08-06 06:40 AM

BOUT

Bob and weave,
move and you'll achieve
the goal of success.

Duck and dive,
dance and you'll arrive
at the completion of your task.

Along the way,
moments filled apprehension
the terror of the tension.

But to the victor the spoils,
The applause of the people,
the joy of the demise of the vanquished.

[This message has been edited by ChrisTonner (08-06-2008 07:56 AM).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2008-08-06 01:42 PM

for sure!

liked this very much!

Welcome to pip, I'm sure you are going to have a lot of fun here. Good people, good poetry

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2008-08-06 02:03 PM

WELCOME TO PIP!

ARCTIC WIND

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

3 posted 2008-08-06 02:42 PM

i liked this one, wonderful writing!

thanks for sharing!

ChrisTonner
Junior Member

since 2008-08-06

Posts 24

4 posted 2008-08-06 03:35 PM

Just wanted to say, thanks, its been a long time before I'd show anyone any stuff I'd written, and everyone on here is so complimentary, it really motivates.

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

5 posted 2008-08-08 11:04 AM

it is sweet

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2008-08-10 06:57 AM

Hello and welcome to our pages blue... I enjoyed reading your first offering, I will look for more of you with pleasure ... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2008-08-10 08:57 AM

Competition has always been a great part of human behaviour. As long as we don't exaggerate, it's ok, but it should not be necessary to win over others to believe in ourselves and to be aware of our worthiness.

This is well done. Welcome to Pip!

Love,
Margherita

ChrisTonner
Junior Member

since 2008-08-06

Posts 24

8 posted 2008-08-10 11:36 AM

Thanks again, it does need work, I'm an amateur boxer and was trying to convey one round in the ring, hence the shortness, as we only have 3 mins, and believe me it passes very fast.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2008-08-10 11:53 AM

knowing now that you box, makes this even cooler...

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