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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-08-06 06:32 AM


you know I can't say those things
not here in the public of your eyes
where your mind sees all of me
not just the lips moving parts

but the hands too that pray
that dreams don't end too soon
as long as you can stand a bit more
and don't mind the afterglow

that you say is consuming you quickly
like quicksand that you have jumped into
and you ask me to help you escape
to give you my hand and pull you free

but then you laugh at my expression
and see that I am already in deeper
since I am taller than you
and jumped just a second before you

into the wanting to want to, always
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1 posted 2008-08-06 11:16 AM


ahhha D

this makes me smile

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2 posted 2008-08-06 11:18 AM


nice write.
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2008-08-06 12:57 PM


Ms suesea. Thank you babe

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Fade thank you

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4 posted 2008-08-06 03:47 PM


I really love this. Wow D. xxxjanetxxx
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5 posted 2008-08-07 02:59 AM


in the water's rush
we lie submerged, our breathing
stilled by turbid dreams.

Mmmm... kinda like swimming with the dolphins.

Indigo

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6 posted 2008-08-07 06:00 AM


ms indi...if I write you love poems
will you hate them...thanks babe

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7 posted 2008-08-10 01:32 PM


Now, that's some jumping, dear D.! Freedom isn't an option when there is Love.

Awesome.

Love,
Margherita

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8 posted 2008-08-10 03:10 PM


ms mar, thanks babe!!
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9 posted 2008-08-11 01:16 AM


You know, D, when I close my eyes, I see your poetry.  You wrote beautiful on this one.  Hip boots are a necessity in my life.

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Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2008-08-11 06:01 AM


ms ali-san...or barefoot, thanks babe for looking in here
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11 posted 2008-08-11 08:51 AM




ARCTIC WIND

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2008-08-11 09:42 AM


A/w thank you so much my friend
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