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soul drifter
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0 posted 2008-08-06 02:05 AM


Carry It On

Gotta carry it on
gotta carry it on
until the end of the song
out of darkness, into the dawn

Gotta carry it on
the valley deep
the river runs long
carried until the world is gone

I had it so wrong
left her standing on the lawn
I carried away her heart's joy
oh what a desperate desolate boy
but I beg forgiveness
and I need a witness
and a voice for my song
to carry it on

All the collected bones
black and white, whispers and moans
and all the right and wrong
I need to carry it on

Gotta carry it on
to sing it in song
sing it for everyone
and they can carry it on
heart, body and mind
all the meaning they find
long after the end of this song
forever carry it on



"Now if I seem to be afraid
to live the life that I have made in song,
well it's just that I've been losing for so long" -- Jackson Browne, 'These Days'

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1 posted 2008-08-06 11:14 AM




wonderful!!


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2 posted 2008-08-06 11:19 AM


nice write.
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