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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2008-08-05 04:54 AM


seconds await…
my heart is open, nearly completing marvel
vision closed between me and reality

in disbelieve
I wish to wear ME

a bundle of beats slowly increasing its number
in a reach of emotion
I know it, remembering the path

in a middle of a fiction
colorful and white
lives contempt the one I’m dressed in

fit so deadly I swim…not alone  



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1 posted 2008-08-07 01:53 AM


Your poems never fail to move me. It's been months since I was here, and much longer since I considered myself to be a part of this site....but when I saw your name, a question was answered that I didn't know I had asked.

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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
2 posted 2008-08-07 02:29 AM


thank you Ratleader, your opinion is always truely valuable
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