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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2008-08-04 07:31 PM



i wrote this one last year, i was waiting for an old friend to come home and suddenly the idea appeared

i hope you enjoy reading it as much as i did writing it!.

here we go,

Crystal Feelings

crystal feelings
fragile but clear
beautiful to the eye
sensitive to the touch

if you put them near the light
a rainbow appears
but don't let them fall
'cause they will shatter

crystal feelings
so beautiful
so fragile

crystal feelings
don't let them shatter
they are all that makes you human
it's impossible to recover them
once they are shattered
although even if they shatter
if you put them near the light
you will see many rainbows

those are the memories
of your feelings
the memories the crystal once had
but know that they are scattered
waiting to be blown
by the wind of oblivion

© Copyright 2008 Denis-DreamerSpirit - All Rights Reserved
MOCindy
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since 2008-07-30
Posts 73

1 posted 2008-08-04 07:50 PM


Pure and clean and warm.  beautiful poem.

C

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2008-08-04 08:48 PM


Very pretty, Denis.
               Ida

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