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Danny Cobb
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since 2008-07-09
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0 posted 2008-08-03 07:28 PM


i
dream of
far-a-way
places to go
in my wander-lust
of scenes I'll never see
at least not with my own eyes
surreal to me but commonplace
to all those claiming it as their home
in my head but a dream mystery.

i
dream of
where life will
take and make me
by it's uncharterd course
a path uniquely mine
plodding t'ward my destiny
the fullness of all i become
will that transforming journey of time
cause me to be unrecognizable
or bring to fruition life's present seed?

oh, how i dream!

© Copyright 2008 Danny Cobb - All Rights Reserved
Marchmadness
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1 posted 2008-08-03 07:32 PM


Hope you keep dreaming, Danny...and writing.
                             Ida

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2008-08-03 07:37 PM


Dream, Danny, dream! A very dreamy write!

May all the seeds that you plant as you go through life, manifest into luscious fruit!


EA

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3 posted 2008-08-04 12:25 PM


Danny~
To dream is to reach for that which is attainable ... keep dreaming poet~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Gaelynsgirl
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since 2008-07-18
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Ont. Canada
4 posted 2008-08-04 09:31 AM


A lovely flow to this poem.

very much enjoyed.

Lynda

amusemi
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5 posted 2008-08-04 01:47 PM


Loved this!!!
Prasad Nataraj
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6 posted 2008-08-04 02:55 PM


When you Dream, Dream big, people always say. However they never tell us what to dream about… it’s nice to dream and read about dream…Nice Dream Danny. Prasad

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
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Bangalore,India
7 posted 2008-08-04 02:56 PM


When you Dream, Dream big, people always say. However they never tell us what to dream about… it’s nice to dream and read about dream…Nice Dream Danny. Prasad

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
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Buenos Aires, Argentina
8 posted 2008-08-04 07:18 PM


Wonderfull dreams you have written here, lots of feelings, and it's very descriptive.

i loved it

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