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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2008-08-03 02:52 PM



I sit among them
in the spring
in their caravan
upon the newborn green
their tiny cloudlike ivory rings
beneath the grander scheme
(and feet that tread upon them)
as they wait
(we wait)
for someone to find
the many gifts
we offer


[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-05-2008 06:58 AM).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2008-08-03 05:54 PM


hmmm...

dandelions?

?

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-08-03 07:06 PM


Is this a 'Goddess Riddle'?

Are they/you ~ dandelions gone to seed? Hmm. Perhaps I best go back and ponder this a bit more.
Whatever they/you are ~ they're/you're lovely!


Linda

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2008-08-04 12:10 PM


their tiny cloudlike ivory rings

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I'm thinking, I'm thinking....and I'm gonna hurt my head
if you keep me in suspense much longer.

This was pretty in all it's mysterious fanfaire.


Gaelynsgirl
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4 posted 2008-08-04 09:35 AM


Who doesn't love a little mystery to go with the morning coffee! well done!
Artic Wind
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5 posted 2008-08-04 06:57 PM


Mysterious Indeed!-- But if this is intended to be a little Riddle. I LOVE to try and solve them or find the hidden messages



ARCTIC WIND

inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2008-08-04 09:11 PM


no riddle at all intended

thanks for reading me kids

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2008-08-04 10:59 PM


This



is why I thought "dandelions"...


Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2008-08-05 05:46 AM


ms inky you are amazing..
inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2008-08-05 06:58 AM


thanks guys and dollars

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
10 posted 2008-08-12 02:08 AM


Loving the picture you've painted here...

simply beautiful, Michele...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

Margherita
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11 posted 2008-08-12 05:11 AM


Makes me want to sit with you ...

Awesome!

Love,
Margherita

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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12 posted 2008-08-15 08:33 PM


No riddle,
I've been in this place
Watching and waiting
Protecting, debating

The opening of ivory rings,
A puff of destiny, and new yellow faces
Their place in the crowd.

I loved this one   Keeper

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