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A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13
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0 posted 2008-08-03 01:34 PM


Have you ever been there,
At the border of now and eternity,
Have you dared to cross it
With two sad life stories at stake,
Have you tried to find
The new, most deceptive truth,
Or have you been stubbornly carrying
The cross of your fate?

Have you managed to take a deep breath
Being right at the bottom,
Have you chosen between love and love
At least once in your life,
Have you been sincere
(Read: have you been alone),
Have you been faithless to all
Of my three inner "I"?

Have you taken the risk of one step
Just to see what will happen next,
Have you ever seen me
Through the prism of a dangerous mind?
All your words have been only tales.
well, a promise is not a debt,
And eternity couldn't last longer
Than that drunken night.

© Copyright 2008 April A. - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2008-08-03 02:38 PM


Extremely interesting and thought provoking write, Beautiful Disaster.
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