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vandana
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0 posted 2008-08-03 12:08 PM




Love Songs

Sitting here
Wide open eyes
Awaken
With the thunder and lighting
The rain still pouring harder
at night
Love comes first
to my mind
Changing winds
love songs of yours
Listen to each heart break words
To my mind
Blowing winds
To my heart
your love songs that written
From your heart
Each pressing page
I read of your lines
Opening each page
Reminding me of our love
of our time
And my heart for you
your love songs
still remind of the time
We used to write each love song
With love
and opened heart
Not broken heart
between each line of yesterday
and tomorrow
Love songs of ours
and filling my heart and songs
still remains in my heart
listen to your heart
and to my heartbeat
For very first time
In my lifetime
Your love on my heart
still remains......



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Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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1 posted 2008-08-03 12:19 PM


Sounds like you're missing someone, Vandana.
                               Ida

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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2 posted 2008-08-04 07:25 PM


Enjoyed...James
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2008-08-04 08:15 PM


wow!

your poem reminds me of a love I once had...

a very tender, and romantic write!

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2008-08-04 09:16 PM


Vandana, this is a wonderful romantic write.
I am really enjoying the way your writing has been progressing! I wish I could write a reply to you in your native tongue!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2008-08-05 10:36 AM


This write is very Romantic indeed!-- I like how you express you're feelings for this person with a Love song in ones heart.

Tender Write, Vandana.


ARCTIC WIND

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