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All in a Days Haiku |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Dawn wears a pink slip bathing in the morning mist windy mountain peaks. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Slated blue iris' awash with yellow sunflowers reflect golden glints. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dusk softens the clouds airbrushing the western sky blowing cool breezes. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Such a lovely sharing of your day - what a way to end mine. Thank you. Hopefully, I'll carry your images to my dreams. Alison |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Stunning! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lori, those are three of the loveliest haiku that I have had the pleasure of experiencing ~ Therefore, I must tuck them away to be savored again and again!   Love to you, Bluesy One! Linda |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
gems in morning's eye clarity of awareness each one perfection * * * |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I am beginning to search out your name, Blues. Your excellent poetry is growing on me, Ida |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
feeling part of the scenery here the blue the pink and the sands between |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluezy...nice slice babe |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You guys make me so happy! Thank you for leaving your nice replies, they are very much appreciated. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSeranade~ How very, very lovely are these~ My favorite - 'Dawn wears a pink slip bathing in the morning mist windy mountain peaks.' *sigh* ... such beautiful imagery this paints~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you Marge~ I am flattered that you stopped by to read and reply to my work. I hope you are on the mend and feeling like yourself again. Best to you~ |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
One of my favourite forms of poetry! Very nicely done!!! Your day to honour nature goes fully appreciated. and nice reply icebox! Lynda |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely, Bluesy! I can see it all. Helen |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Dawn wears a pink slip bathing in the morning mist windy mountain peaks........." This caught my eye at first Sight!-- Perfect little Haiku ARCTIC WIND |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
I definitely agreed with what the others say. A tribute to nature in such wonderful way, like these poems. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
*smile* One of my favorite poetry forms. I love how you must work to choose just the right words to propel the imagery and the feelings behind them. You do it justice, Blues! Indigo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So nice of you all to say so, thanks for enjoying the day. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Enjoyed all three greatly, dear Lori! Very beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
an excellent choice of words...very well done dear lady. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Love Haiku...haven't written any in a long time...enjoyed these a lot, though, my friend. j. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful haiku's and a very nice treat to find in this early part of the day. So very nice to see you still here and sharing. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You all are just too kind!! Thank you, thank you~ |
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