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gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
Posts 117


0 posted 2008-08-03 12:56 PM




Your life just slams
Into the ground
Nothing is going by without you
Everyone has something else to do
People said bye was supposed to mean something
But I don’t think it has to do with anything to do with me
Until the girl just said good bye have a good night
Now I’m alone on the corner with nothing left to do
I’m have everything and it went away just like that
I wish I was needed
I must make a stand with a one word war
But what if I die on the way?
This is just a game
Everyone has a piece to use
Now they have to find out what it means before they lose
Life is a game with waiting and losing
You may lose everything but it might come back
Before you fall on your face
I wish I could make you happy
But everything is in my way
Your gunna be gone
Please don’t let that happen
I guess I can’t stop it now
Everything is gone


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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2008-08-03 01:09 AM


Your bleeding heart hurts to read, and losing at love sux!!!

There's something to be said for being happy in our own company,
and learning to laugh at ourselves so we'll never cease to be amused.

(helps me cope anyway)     

amusemi
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
2 posted 2008-08-03 09:41 AM


Sometimes life does feel like a game...and at least for me it has often felt as if everyone else knew the rules except me.  People have come and gone in my life and over time they have become a fascinating collage of personalities, each gifting me with memories that became chunks of who I am.  Remember that we can always take them with us, even when they are gone.  I enjoy the depth and emotion in your pieces.
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