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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-08-02 06:26 AM


it seems only natural now
to want another bite
since you did serve me a taste
and waited to see my reaction

before you put the price on
and updated the menu
that said if you love it
it is more expensive

but if you only like it
it is free and there are seconds
with doggy bags too
and assistance to carry

but I guess you knew I would
want the impossible slice
even if I had to steal it
and leave you without any more

except the napkin of your smile

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amusemi
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A State of Disarray
1 posted 2008-08-02 11:01 AM


'D'-elicious!
SEA
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with you
2 posted 2008-08-02 11:04 AM


ya make a girl hungry...
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2008-08-02 11:57 AM


ms muse...thanks babe


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ms suesea, hmmmmmmmmmmmm thank you lady for the suggestions

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2008-08-03 12:25 PM


You make it hard to wipe that smile off my face...

hmmmm, bitin' my lip!!

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Member Rara Avis
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
5 posted 2008-08-03 02:20 AM


D

You make me think of how much I love the courses of a meal.  The appetizer, perhaps a bit of drink, then maybe the main course with a few condiments on the side, after-dinner sipping with a creamy, sweet dessert.  The menu always varied - sometimes spicey or hot dishes mixed with cream to cut the heat.  Yes, I am hungry now.

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-08-03 05:48 AM


mmmm... yessssss.....   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2008-08-03 06:15 AM


ms bluezy, thank you pretty lady..coffee again?

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ms ali-san, thanks for dining with me babe..hope you are still hungry?


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ms r&b, thanks lady friend

Indigo
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8 posted 2008-08-04 10:09 PM


tables lose meaning
when hunger demands its due
silverware scattered.

Mmmmmm...the postman always rings twice.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2008-08-05 05:45 AM


ms indi....
one of my favorite movies
perhaps we should redo it sometime?
thanks babe

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
10 posted 2008-08-05 04:24 PM


Nice Write Dark!


ARCTIC WIND

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2008-08-05 04:42 PM


a&w, thanks my friend
ms_doodiekins
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OZ
12 posted 2008-08-05 05:06 PM


yummy
Spuddette
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13 posted 2008-08-05 05:38 PM


Such clever lines yet again D. I love your style. xxxjanetxxx
Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2008-08-05 05:53 PM


ms doodie' thanks you so much for the yummy


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ms janet...thank so much for looking in ms

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