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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2008-08-02 02:22 AM


Angelica
upon her knees
whispered to the Virgin

please

Pray me not
in sweat and rot:

"I am...I am...?"

What hath God wrought?

oh-so-not-accordingly

Angelica prays eloquent;
and sings the angels' sad repent

fallen

       on

             her

                    knees -


she's spent...

             puddled

                     prone

                          in love...

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (08-02-2008 02:57 AM).]

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Ericc
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1 posted 2008-08-02 03:16 PM


Oh wow...this is awesome!
Definitely my favorite from you (and I have lots of them!)

Eric

XOx Uriah xOX
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Virginia
2 posted 2008-08-02 07:55 PM


"she's spent...

             puddled

                     prone

                          in love..."

::smiles::   as it should be

XOx Uriah xOX
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Virginia
3 posted 2008-08-02 08:02 PM


P.S.     ::smiles::

Veni Mortem is my son.  If you find the time to read and reply... I know your comments will be honored.  He is a bit of a fan of yours.  ::shrugs::   go figure

(((Serenity)))

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2008-08-02 08:29 PM


Sometimes

the fallen

receive the best
of all fruition...




Ceinwyn
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5 posted 2008-08-02 11:28 PM


wow! I am like wow...hehe you like my use of big words?

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2008-08-03 04:34 PM


Well, I found the inspiration for this'n some time ago, I just don't often show this side of me.

But I blushingly say thank you..

and awwwwwwwww....Larry? I'm gonna have to check your son. (Be afraid. Be very afraid.)

laughing



Love to all.

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2008-08-05 11:17 PM


fallen

       on

             her

                    knees -


she's spent...

             puddled

                     prone

                           in love...

...........................................

Again I find myself reading your great work Serenity!

p.s. This is my favorite part! *hehehe*


ARCTIC WIND

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
8 posted 2008-08-07 10:12 PM


Enticing write, Serenity~

It must be love!!!  

MOCindy
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since 2008-07-30
Posts 73

9 posted 2008-08-08 12:06 PM


Love the read.(strong feelings is shown in the style)
C

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2008-08-09 11:13 PM


Serenity... you rock!  loved this offering from you my friend... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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