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Open Poetry #43
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gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
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0 posted 2008-08-01 10:23 PM



Its going to happen the end is near
I’m afraid to say it’s true
I can’t hold it in this day
She has my heart
But doesn’t want it
So she threw it away
And now I have nothing
I want to call you my friend
But women like you
Don’t want to do anything
With guys like me
Everything is see in your eyes
Its love and things I can’t describe
I can’t tell you
But I want to be your man
You just don’t want me to tell you who I am
This is not my life
Everything I see is not right
I can’t tell you what I want or what I see
But please let me look into your eyes
They are diamond stone
They are beautiful please don’t look away

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amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
1 posted 2008-08-02 10:55 AM


Powerful write.  I hope you get your girl!
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