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xTr3m3sT
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0 posted 2008-08-01 10:07 PM


Worried souls wallow with melancholy
for the death of man has become so true
asphyxiate the lungs of thee holy
with the ropes of disorder chaos and blues.

The deepest truth is buried deep within
as the lies consume this corrupted sphere
weave through the path of human destruction
for thee awakening of man is near.

Open the mirrors of your handicapped soul
to let the reflection of real man see
the problems he has caused between humans
and the pain he has caused to you and me.

The pain of man
is felt through us.

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xTr3m3sT
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1 posted 2008-08-01 10:16 PM


It's good to be back in the land of the Blue
Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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2 posted 2008-08-02 11:18 AM


Yo Angel,

It's great to see youse again.

Nice poem.  Keep up the good work.

Bobby

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