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The Shadow in Blue
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since 2006-05-18
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0 posted 2008-08-01 04:08 PM


Lose yourself
In
The
Moment

Embrace each
Fleeting emotion

Let yourself
Be swept off your feet
By the
Symphony of life

Just
Breathe


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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
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1 posted 2008-08-01 05:38 PM


I like it. Good advice.
     Ida

The Shadow in Blue
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2 posted 2008-08-01 07:27 PM


To quote the King of Rock 'n Roll,
"Thank you, Thank you very much."

Glad you liked it.

What can I say. I'm full of little gems like this. ^_^

JNS

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia
3 posted 2008-08-01 09:14 PM


Yes    Just breathe    or...forget about breathing...   and just...    Be  
::smiles::    
In this moment this was very much enjoyed.

The Shadow in Blue
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4 posted 2008-08-01 09:41 PM


Hear hear Uriah.I'm glad you enjoyed my poem this moment. Thanks.


Jill

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2008-08-02 02:45 PM


Yessirreee! ~ and I'm breathing more easily at this moment because of you! ~ and I love your new pic! You look like you "practice what you preach"!

I enjoyed getting lost in the moment of reading this delightful post!

Love & easy as it goes,
Linda

secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2008-08-02 04:32 PM


a fine, succinct manifesto of 'nowism' (being fully 'alive' in each moment; etc.)

applause for this 'penning'!

The Shadow in Blue
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7 posted 2008-08-02 07:50 PM


Linda~ Thanks-for the compliments about my poem and pic.I'm glad you enjoyed getting lost in my penned moment.I try to, and have, lived what I preach-finally.



Secondhanddreampoet~ Thanks for the compliments. Glad the nowism rang through.
*bows extravantly with a grin*

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