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Ada'Do'Lis'Do'Ti
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germany

0 posted 2008-07-31 11:06 PM


I sit here in the dark fighting tears.
Never felt like this in all my years.
Fight to put you in the back of my mind.
So I can make it through work one more time.
Keep waiting for the other shoe to drop.
To get to the point my emotions won't stop.
So I finally have this break down.
I feel it coming hope no one is around.
When my heart finally realizes your so far away.
Keep apologizing, I can't talk to you today.
So busy with nothing I can think is worth while.
But I sighned up for this long cold mile.
Nothing to keep me warm but my memory.
Unable to see ou except when I dream.
It's 3 am sleep still evades me.
While i think about how things could be.
A foolish thing to keep me up at night.
But here I sit at dawns first light.
Still staring at a picture of you.
As the desert slowly comes to veiw.
With red tint like the world bleeds.
I think of you as darkness recedes.
As the sun rises my tears fall....

Everyday I see a sunrise is a blessing, Every night I see the moon rise is a miracle.

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2008-08-01 05:41 PM


Hoping for you, dear Albert, the next sunset leaves you with a peaceful heart and mind. To be far away from those you care most about is always difficult.


Danny Cobb
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since 2008-07-09
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2 posted 2008-08-02 02:38 PM


a lot of feelings and spent emotions here
suitably expressed!
  How difficult it is to kep on keeping on sometimes!

You expressed it well!

     danny cobb

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By the Seaside
3 posted 2008-08-03 12:55 PM


As the desert slowly comes to veiw.
With red tint like the world bleeds.

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Wonderful expression and such an emotional write.  
I hope the view has changed colors that might soothe you.

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