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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-07-31 06:48 AM



I guess we could talk about meaning
and meaningless
or what ever is in between
when lovers are plugging together
their wanting and their needing

and trying to keep everything balanced
but not really wanting to
as balance becomes boring after awhile
and the need to just ruin it
is so much more lovely

so we just exchange those glances
and let nature undo the done stuff
while our hands and mind untie
shoe laces on our flip flops
just to be there looking up

and waiting for reactions to change


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daark

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1 posted 2008-07-31 09:52 AM


"so we just exchange those glances
and let nature undo the done stuff
while our hands and mind untie"

very nice D

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-07-31 10:05 AM


Ms suesea. Thanks babe. Wink
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-07-31 08:39 PM


love this Mr Daark.... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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4 posted 2008-08-01 02:44 AM


D

You know, I was tying my flip flops today and just thinking the same darn thing.  Amazing, I say.

A

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2008-08-01 06:21 AM


ms r&b, thanks babe


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ms ali-san...so that is why you didn't answer the phone...thanks babe

Indigo
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6 posted 2008-08-01 02:35 PM


the yin and the yang
tossed aside, a blur of gray
when they are undone.

When you were little, bet you wrote with all over the walls with crayons too...

Indigo

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7 posted 2008-08-01 02:51 PM


Ms indi. I didn't have walls when young. Only just got them a few years ago at rincon on a summer afternoon. Thanks lady.  
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