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apes531
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since 2008-07-23
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0 posted 2008-07-31 12:57 PM


The drive there was so quick, I could’ve sworn it was longer
All this hatred and guilt im feeling, is only gonna make me stronger
As I step out the car, I read the signs "the baby doesn’t want to die."
Everything hits me at that moment I put my hood up, and begin to breakdown and cry.

I open the door to the clinic, a million thoughts are racing through my head
Im wishing someone was here with me but Im alone, this choice im starting to dread.
As im waiting to hear my name called, I look around and see this place is full of sin
I hear my name called but I cant move, somethings holding me back something from within

Eventually I find the power to get up, I walk slowly back to the room
No turning back now its way to late, I just sealed my babys doom
The nurse tells me to watch this video, and everthings gonna be alright
It shows the risks and side effects, which only bring more fright.

Next I go to the death filled room, the doctor tells me to change while he waits in the hall,
As I sit there and gaze in to the distance, I catch his eyes, he has no soul no feeling at all
His hands were cold and his touch was uncomfortable, with tears rolling down I prayed
As the doctor began the procedure, and I heard the sounds I only became more afraid.

The whole thing lasted about five minutes, but felt like a lifetime
They put me in a room to sit with a heating pad and to relax, all I could think of was this awful crime
As I wait to leave I realized all I can do is be ashamed and theres no one to blame but me,
It hurts to walk I barley make it to the car, b4 I get in I look up and say im sorry plz set me free.


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