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Open Poetry #43
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gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
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0 posted 2008-07-31 12:50 PM


While we wait for our lives to begin
I want to tell you something
It’s true
I was looking at you wanting a wish to come true
Sometimes not everything you get
I wish this wasn’t right
We were built to try
All I know is that it doesn’t work the way you want it
My head spins trying to figure her out
Woke up today
With her on my mind
About the time I want to leave
You come walking around
I see your face with the expression that says you’re dumb
Why don’t you leave before you become undone?
All the time I hear your name said peacefully
I grow chills that make every body know
That the girl I want around
Is close
So I better stay here to let her know
That I want to show her my name

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apes531
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since 2008-07-23
Posts 35

1 posted 2008-07-31 01:00 AM


this is a nice write, it sounds like you lost or cant get with the girl you want..
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