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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-07-30 07:05 PM


When the Stars Caressed the Moon

In the evenings
we would fade into
the shadows
under the sheets
upon our bed
where sensuality
would overcome
the thoughts
within our heads,
into our world of
touch and smell
onto the pleasures
of silk and Chanel
when the stars
caressed the moon
where the mornings
came too soon.

JamesLee
29July
2008









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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-07-30 07:11 PM


quote:
onto the pleasures
of silk and Chanel
when the stars
caressed the moon
where the mornings
came too soon.



Oh, how romantic, dear James! Very lovely and sensual.

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2008-07-30 10:12 PM


In the evenings
we would fade into
the shadows
under the sheets
upon our bed
where sensuality
would overcome
the thoughts......"

Romantic write JamesMichael!-- I like this part because it's descriptive and poetic.



ARCTIC WIND

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