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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-07-30 06:32 AM


I guess we did know in the beginning
that making love left handed
was not going to ever be enough
since we were both right handed really
when we thought about it after

or maybe that was just an excuse for more
like seconds at the dessert bar
when you skip your entree and salad
and only want the sweet stuff
that leaves that liquor residue

and makes you feel sinful after
when you have had more than you should
but there is still some left
and no one else seems to be looking
so what the hell, why not enjoy it all

and we looked at each other off handedly
with our own special smirks revealed
and just let gradual happen quickly
until we were both handsomely pleased
with how we handled the outcome

but then again there was tomorrow


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daark

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amusemi
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A State of Disarray
1 posted 2008-07-30 07:47 AM


Can't help but think of all those desserts in the Starbuck's displays and how your words are sweeter than them all. Nice write, sir.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2008-07-30 08:03 AM


you do know you  are bad~~~   but in a good way???

M

Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
3 posted 2008-07-30 08:34 AM


D

Makes me all cozy and feeling like forever in bed (and anywhere else) would be perfection.

A

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-07-30 08:58 AM


Ms muse' thanks for stopping over for coffee thoughts.

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Ms MMs moi?  Thanks babe.
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Ms ali-san. Thank you for that set of thoughts.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2008-07-30 09:16 AM


Glad to know that the earthquake didn't
shake up your thoughts any more than usual.



It's good to read you...


Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-07-30 09:30 AM


Yo Dark Stranger,

This is pretty good work, in a casual—off hand way.

Bobby

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2008-07-30 09:35 AM


Ms sun. It was kinda fun actually.  Thanks lady friend.

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Bobby J thanks so much guy.

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
8 posted 2008-07-30 11:29 AM


Enjoyed the write--In a good way too. lol


ARCTIC WIND

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2008-07-30 01:21 PM


A/W. Thanks for the read. In a good way too.
Martie
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10 posted 2008-07-30 04:44 PM


Hi stranger....I'm ambidextrous
Margherita
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Eternity
11 posted 2008-07-30 07:21 PM


..."handsomely pleased"

Always nice when there is a tomorrow ...

You are very good at being "bad" it seems

One thing is sure: your poems are always GOOD, but that is an understatement.

Love,
Margherita

Gaelynsgirl
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12 posted 2008-07-30 08:49 PM


You leave enough to the imagination... enough to drive one crazy...hehe..

when bad is 'bad'.... and the man knows it!

catching my breath...

L.

Indigo
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since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

13 posted 2008-07-31 02:11 AM


they say indulgence
is the place between wanting
and not looking back.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2008-07-31 06:07 AM


ms mar, thanks so much lady friend


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ms martie, thanks lil neighbor, I do want both of those hands


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ms Lynda, thank you for the eyes and sigh sounds


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ms indi..so would you consider overindulging?
perhaps often?  thanks hon

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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15 posted 2008-08-03 06:03 AM


and tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow Mr Daark.... beautiful gifting here.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
16 posted 2008-08-03 06:14 AM


ms R&B...thanks babe
vandana
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17 posted 2008-08-03 12:10 PM


enjoyed
inkedgoddess
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18 posted 2008-08-03 02:49 PM


feeling squirmy
and wanting to be your last dessert
or desert or somehting like that
cant spell now..just feeling sweet for you

Dark Stranger
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19 posted 2008-08-03 04:13 PM


ms vandana, thanks lady


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ms inky...you do make me want more than a mouthful of what ever you are serving, thanks babe

ms_doodiekins
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since 2008-08-01
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OZ
20 posted 2008-08-04 02:38 AM


oh i knew i was going to be in a treat when i saw this.

thank you

Dark Stranger
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21 posted 2008-08-04 06:02 AM


ms doodie..thanks so much lady, and welcome to the PIPzoo side of OZ
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