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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2008-07-30 03:57 AM




             Erupt The Morn
                        ~*Marge Tindal*~


       Having been too long,
               swallowed by the ebon of night
         it leaves me gulping for the light
            of the summer sun in rupture
                 over meadows of delight~

           Painted summer florals
         will erupt across the lawn
      I am close ...
             oh, so close
         to the calm onset of dawn~

            Lay me down in verdant clover
        turn my easy heart quite over
      Warming showers of refreshing spray
             saturate the on-come of day~



~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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1 posted 2008-07-30 04:01 AM


Marge,

This is a morning pleasure. Well, it's midnight here.  I am staying up as we are in major flood warnings here.  I have been going out and putting up lawn furniture, garden pumps and stuff in the pouring down rain.  I love seeing the morn erupt in your world.

Thank you for making me smile as I sip my coffee on a break.

A

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2 posted 2008-07-30 05:05 AM


Dear Marge

It was so good to read your poetry again!  A lovely poem about 'Dawn-of-Day'!  I pray you are well on the road to recovery!

Love Elizabeth (Betty Lou) xo


Betty
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3 posted 2008-07-30 08:55 AM


Beautiful
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4 posted 2008-07-30 09:08 AM


Lovely as always, Marge. I hope you are on the road to good health.


M

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5 posted 2008-07-30 11:25 AM


Well first off-- Good Morning !
and Beautiful poem you have written for it



ARCTIC WIND

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6 posted 2008-08-17 04:32 PM


Dear Marge:

Lovely poem and so enjoyable to read. Thanks for posting it.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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