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gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
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0 posted 2008-07-29 09:03 PM



I walked around whistling
With a tune you might want to listen
It’s a story of you
You’re the girl I first laid eyes on
Your eyes are diamond stone
We’ll never be through
You’re my treasure
I want you to listen
Every time I try and catch your name
Nobody will ever let my ears hear that sweet rhythm
Each day the odds grow smaller
To hear that rhythm of your name
Nobody wants to live like I do
Longing for that heart everyday
Nobody wants to help out
So I have to go on my own and find it
Before some other people do

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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
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1 posted 2008-07-29 09:13 PM


Forlorn love. Sweet sorrow.

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

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