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AngelFall
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since 2008-07-29
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0 posted 2008-07-29 07:19 PM



We have been throw it all
I know your pain
You know mine
I know that as long we are together we can make it
I also know that without each other we are nothing
If one of us died the other one would die too
The way we love is strong and unbreakable
Sometimes we do stupid things like arguing about small things
but in the end we always laugh at it
I never really told you that I love you but somehow I think you know anyway
I guess everyone can see it
The way we speak to each others
The way we touch each others
And the way we protect each others
If you told me to jump from the biggest mountain
I would
If I had to sacrifice everything for you, just to keep you alive then so be it I don’t care
You are my everything and you always will be so don´t forget that I Love you.

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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
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1 posted 2008-07-29 09:09 PM


Love the passion once again. No critique, just a comment on what I like about it...

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

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