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AngelFall
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0 posted 2008-07-29 07:12 PM



Is there anything I can do to change the fact that I love you?
Is there?
No I don´t think so
I tried once
But just acting like friends hurts
Because when I think of you I realize I like you more then only a simple friend
I wish I didn’t  
I’m sorry…
I wish the time could go back to where we were….
I shouldn’t have told you my secret
I know that if I didn’t
Nothing would have happened and nothing would have changed  
So now I’m sitting in my bed and just thinking of a way out of this life…
Because I mean I can’t stop think of you each and every day....
I’m so sorry I didn’t want it to end it like this…
Here is my last word I LOVE YOU FOREVER!


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2008-07-29 07:55 PM


There is nothing wrong with having feelings for someone who doesn't feel the same. It happens so often, there are thousands of poets who've written about unrequited love, ever since time began.
Welcome to Pips. Write your feelings, and know that many readers will be able to relate. (PS, we also have a very active teen forum)

XGarapanX
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2 posted 2008-07-29 09:05 PM


Holy cow, what a passionate vent this is. Unfortunately, it wasn't long ago I might have written this myself.

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

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singapore
3 posted 2008-08-01 11:11 AM


welcome to passions! i hope this write was therapeutic
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