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Spuddette
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since 2008-07-03
Posts 112
England

0 posted 2008-07-29 05:55 PM


Monday

Cracker things
hot & spicy clipped wings
one single serving of special fried ego
sweet & sour dreams
a bottle of something mean.
All to go.

Tuesday

4 minute noodles
Plain
(left the flavour out)

Wednesday

Cheese on Toast
Followed by microwave fries
(Although technically followed by ice cream
as potatoe fries were made of lies)

Thursday

Chocolate cake
Chocolate spread
More chocolate cake
Chocolate in bed
Chocolate lonely chocolate
Dead Dead Dead

Friday

Regurgitated hope
Deep breaths and cheesey winks
With easy summer breezy drinks

Saturday

Coffee!
Actual Regular Straight Up Sit Down Coffee!
(stirred for several hours)

Sunday

A feast of rapacious glutt
Banquet for two
Double portions of excellent
And fine marvellous mood


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-07-29 06:04 PM


Thursday is my day, but I'll want to survive to be in the rapacious glut Sunday mood ...

Must go and search for some chocolate ...

What a dazzling piece of poetry!

Love,
Margherita

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2008-07-29 06:47 PM


I'll take seconds...

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2008-07-29 09:29 PM


Very interesting piece, Spudette. My mood needs some chocolate too.
                                 Ida

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
4 posted 2008-07-29 11:28 PM


What a wonderful menu.  I'll take the coffee day please.  You have me smiling.  I think that this poem is really so creative.

Well done and thank you for sharing.

Alison

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
5 posted 2008-07-29 11:44 PM



Regurgitated hope
Deep breaths and cheesey winks
With easy summer breezy drinks

Yes that is a very clever poem Spudette,
You wrote it well, Love  

Lindsay


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