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Open Poetry #43

Setting Brilliant

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2008-07-29 03:15 PM

Almost
Gone –
And still your form lingers
Against the faded day.
Setting brilliant in my mind.

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2008-07-29 03:17 PM

Dang, you are killing me, dude, LOL! What a write!

·´~`·»Brett«·´~`·

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2008-07-29 04:06 PM

Eric - You delve deep and you come up with brilliance!

Helen

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-07-29 05:48 PM

Your mind reveals a magical scenery, dear Eric!

Awesome!

Margherita

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2008-07-29 11:34 PM

Eric,

I love the poetry that you share with us. This is my new favorite of yours.

Alison

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2008-07-30 01:33 AM

Each breath I draw
Brings you deeper
Into my soul

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

6 posted 2008-07-30 01:51 AM

and... your mind is brilliant! A pleasure, as always,

~misc~

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2008-07-30 02:18 AM

You certainly do have a way with words, Eric. This is so clever.
Ida

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2008-07-30 04:50 PM

Ericc.....the image of the sun setting, that is left on the retina long after it is gone, is brilliant. Love the poem.

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