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Twenty-Five-Days |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India 
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 Painting done by Me.Twenty Five Days She wanted to see us so badly, With great hurry she came into this world, With her tiny, sparkling eyes, she saw me carefully, The weather outside was very cold. For her my dad bought a woolen sweater, Wearing that sweater may be she felt a little better, She was very tiny,tender and soft, Suddenly she developed severe cold and cough. That night my mom had nightmares, Like they both entered a demons lair, She woke up immediately and held my sister with hands bare, My sister hardly moved or stared. After that night she never saw daylight, She left me alone in the worldly fight, For twenty five days, she stayed with us, She rode back to heaven on an early bus. Prasad.N "Hardwork pays in the long run" [This message has been edited by Prasad Nataraj (07-29-2008 09:20 AM).] |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Lovely write...very touching losing a baby is so traumatic our loss is HP's gain take care. vic |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, how sad for your parents and you, to lose her so soon.  Thank you for writing such a tender euology, and sharing her spirit with us. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Might I start off by congratulating you on that fine piece of art that you did! ~ Your little angel sister riding back to heaven on a bus. A touching, tender, and exceptionally loving write. A loss such as your family's will be with you always but hopefully with the passing of time, so does some of the pain. Sending you a warm, loving hug, Linda  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Prasad, How deeply I feel this. And the picture is perfect and so well done. You are a very talented man. You are also very compassionate and we are blessed that you are here to show us your heart. Alison |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Vic, it was a traumatic experience to my parents and I was just a two year old kid that time. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Midnitesun, since her birthday is coming this August 2nd I thought of writing about her. Thank so much for your comments. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Linda, thank so much, I am glad you liked my painting. I do paintings for all my poems just that only now I got to know how to add pictures to my poetry. Yes, time is the best healer just that every August 2nd the wound gets fresh. Thank you so much for wonderful comments. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Alison, I am glad you can feel what I feel. Thank you for the compliment on my painting. I am the lucky one to be around such wonderful kind hearted people. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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