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gdcod2player
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0 posted 2008-07-29 01:11 AM



I still want to figure you out
I want to find out who I am
Nothing will ever let me look away
Your name is something in the air
I haven’t heard it said
I guess I need to start complaining
Id call you on the phone
And have nothing to say
I’m speechless for your pretty voice
Girl you make my dreams come true
Everything you do I’ve realized
That another man is in your life
I guess I need to move on
But its gunna be hard
You’re the girl that I wanted in my life
I should just keep going
The way I began
Its time to leave
Its time to let you loose
Ask me where I went
And I have nothing to say
Ask me what I did
And I have a story to tell you
The girl I wanted
Has left my dreams
The girl I need
Has left without a trace

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2008-07-29 12:42 PM


quote:
Your name is something in the air
I haven’t heard it said



The sound of a name is indeed something intimately  perceived, when the connection is there ...

A lovely write of longing and of heart/mind reasonings.

Love,
Margherita

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