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Open Poetry #43

I was an illusion

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2008-07-28 09:04 PM

It was to late: I was already in love
there was a need, that shook deep inside myself
it drew me near like an addiction

But your gone now, Just as fast you found new love
I was alone, to rebuild this broken heart
Then I realized, That you had never loved me
A crooked dream, was the thing that kissed your lips
And I became, the only one left behind
No longer me, No longer the illusion

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-07-29 08:01 AM

quote:
It was too late: I was already in love
there was a need, that shook deep inside myself
it drew me near like an addiction

This is a very real danger, indeed, dear Juju!
I love your acquired consciousness, even though there is a bitter aftertaste.

Very beautifully expressed and very insightful too.

Thank you.

Love,
Margherita

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