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Open Poetry #43
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gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
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0 posted 2008-07-28 08:33 PM


I think your thrill is gone
You didn’t seem to think I was there
Pretty girl don’t let me be alone
You said “you have big dreams”
I don’t know your name
But that doesn’t mean I won’t try
Nothing will ever change
I want to see your face
With the look of faith
Starring at me with something to say
But that doesn’t mean ill get it
I won’t give up
Nothing you do will make me turn the other way
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PrestonThePoet
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since 2007-11-07
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1 posted 2008-07-28 11:56 PM

Great rhyme scheme.
I enjoyed reading this a lot.
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