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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-07-28 06:38 AM



I know you will wear those thoughts today
the little shear ones, with no lining
that you barely cover the want to with
and then there are the winds
that you seem to look for

when you know my eyes are looking
for something hidden from you
that would become revealed
without me asking out loud
just accidentally on purpose

as if you knew my arms were empty
and there was room in my man cave
for someone dressed just like you
that had a little craving for more
than just the skin of my tattoos

and then you will glance around perhaps
at the busy that you have stacked up
and you will wish I was there too
to help you build a bonfire
and make the easy come back again

like it did at our rincon afternoon
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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-07-28 08:06 AM


So intensely, beautifully nostalgic, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2008-07-28 02:57 PM


You write so beautifully, you frustrate me.

In more ways than one.

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2008-07-28 03:25 PM


Ms mar, you bless me dear one with your reads and replies, thank you.


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Serene1. I prefer frustrated women, they tend to get so rowdy.  Humble thanks for the touch.

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-07-28 06:48 PM


Beautifully Written Indeed



ARCTIC WIND

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2008-07-29 05:54 AM


thank you a&w..much appreciated
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-07-29 06:51 AM


damn... makes me want to visit your Rincon Mr Daark!! beautiful and then some!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2008-07-29 07:23 AM


Ms r/b love your damn and would enjoy watching you touch rincon with your eyes. Thanks babe.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2008-07-29 07:47 AM


"I know you will wear those thoughts today
the little shear ones, with no lining
that you barely cover the want to with
and then there are the winds
that you seem to look for"

pretending you are following me today ~~


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Indigo
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9 posted 2008-07-29 02:27 PM


there in the mirror
of pacific reflection
temptation lingers.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2008-07-29 02:41 PM


Ms MMs thank you babe for the smile side you left.  
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Ms indi you say that as though I mean it. Thank you for wearing this.

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11 posted 2008-07-30 02:14 AM


This reads like an intimate whisper.
Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2008-07-30 06:24 AM


ms ali-san...perhaps it is, thanks babe
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