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apes531
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since 2008-07-23
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0 posted 2008-07-28 12:05 PM


To see you disappointed in me hurts like no other
I never wanted to hurt you mother
I cant change what I’ve done and I live with this everyday
I just want to hide and run away

All you ever did for me was care
I lied and went behide your back you were so unaware
You know I love you and I never wanted this to happen but it did
You have every right to be mad but remember im just a kid

I got a lot of growing up to do and remember nobodys perfect
If you want me to keep it or not will have a hugh affect
Not only on me but him, he has my heart
I cant explain why or how but its been like that from the start

He might not be here right now but he has been any other time
Hes locked up for the wrong crime
I just want you to understand
This wasn’t planned


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kaile
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singapore
1 posted 2008-07-29 12:27 PM


i hope this isn't autobiographical but if this is, some hugs across the miles. hope things are better
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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Antarctica
2 posted 2008-07-29 03:03 PM


As promised... and you've delivered. I love seeing such (nominally common and impacting) everyday subjects broached poetically.

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
Posts 117

3 posted 2008-07-29 08:09 PM


that's sad
i know what it to be there
it completely sucks
good writing though
ill probably read it again
=)

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