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apes531
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since 2008-07-23
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0 posted 2008-07-28 12:02 PM



Running from your problems seems so right,
But im ready to face them tonight.
Things tend to happen for a reason, its hard to see that at first,
So im sitting here preparing for the worst

Try not to be to mad im just a kid who made a bad choice
Not thinking before my actions, forgetting that little voice
You know the one that knows right from wrong,
I need to confess, and I’ve waited way to long.  

This process has already begun,
I want to keep it, take responsibility for what I’ve done.
You might say I shouldn’t and its not right
And of course I care what you think, I’m not doing this out of spite.

You have to understand how I feel everything I every believed would be a lie
Do you honestly feel I should just give it up and not even try?
To make me get rid of it I would be devastated
Left to live unhappy and aggravated

Having it haunt me day after day
Would make me go insane I must say
Might as well give up and say good-bye
This choice has got me feeling like I want to die

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Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
1 posted 2008-07-28 08:45 AM


Hi Apes531,
Good you are ready to face the problems and not run from them. Prasad

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

kaile
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2 posted 2008-07-28 12:21 PM


be brave! and good luck. we'll be here
OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2008-07-28 12:36 PM


Good!  Well done, April, I knew you could, and thanks for your email.  It was much appreciated.

- Owl (Diana)

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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4 posted 2008-07-28 12:51 PM


quote:
Try not to be to mad im just a kid who made a bad choice
Not thinking before my actions, forgetting that little voice
You know the one that knows right from wrong,
I need to confess, and I’ve waited way too long.  



This is very moving, a beautiful profound  write, that makes me want to reach out with a hug.

Love,
Margherita

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